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9:11 PM - Kuroko: In the summer of 1916 General Mouret, the subsecretary of artillery, granted FCM (Forges et Chantiers de la Mediterranée), a shipyard in the south of France near Toulon, the contract for the development of a heavy tank.
9:11 PM - Kuroko: how many problems can you spot in this sentence
9:11 PM - OrenjJews: 1: 1916
9:11 PM - OrenjJews: 2: General
9:11 PM - OrenjJews: 3: Subsecretary
9:12 PM - OrenjJews: 4: Shipyard
9:12 PM - OrenjJews: 5: France
9:12 PM - OrenjJews: 6: France
9:12 PM - OrenjJews: 7: France
9:12 PM - OrenjJews: 8: Toulon
9:12 PM - OrenjJews: 9: Contract
9:12 PM - OrenjJews: 10: Heavy tank